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Jennifer James: Six Sentence Sunday 14: Lucky Sevens


So guess what I’m doing? I’m going to write a western. That’s right, you heard me. A western. And there won’t be any paranormal activity or monsters in it. Although there will be a little ghostly interference. Just a dash. A smidgen. I’m putting the proposal together and am hoping that Decadent will like it for their Free Will series. If they don’t, I’m still writing this book cause these people have been in my head for years and years and damnit, they’re getting good and loud and rather annoying.

I’ve scribbled a few scenes down as they’ve come to me. Here’s six sentences from one of them. Normally I give you guys some erotica, but this one’s a little different. The hero has managed to start a bar fight. Well not a fight. More of a scuffle. Anyway, he gets himself, the heroine, and the other guy tossed out by an off duty deputy. Now, he and the heroine aren’t dating. Yet. In fact, he’s not even sure why he’s followed her to her home in Free Will, Wyoming. All he knows is that he did. And damn if he isn’t pissed that some idiot was groping her in the bar. LOL.

Here’s your six:

(OH and the heroine’s name is Meghan Aubrey Johansson and the hero’s is Colton Samuel Jones. But he goes by Sam. Whay Sam? It’s a long story….. :) )

“What the hell is wrong with you?” She grabbed his elbow and tried to drag him to a stop but he pulled free and kept walking without slowing down.

Charlie climbed into his truck, threw some muttered swear words Β and a rude gesture in Sam’s direction, and peeled out of the parking lot.

“Nothing.” His jaw flexed and he began to stalk down the sidewalk with clenched fists.

“Stupid, stubborn man.”


What do you guys think? Should I keep going with this?

You can see the other Sixer’s posts here. Happy Easter and Passover, everyone!

Comments (26)

  1. Laura Kaye April 8, 2012 at 4:34 am

    Ooh, interesting! And good luck with the new project! :)

  2. Buffy Kennedy April 8, 2012 at 6:22 am

    Hehe, a little obstinance makes for great sparks…

  3. Corinne Davies April 8, 2012 at 6:28 am

    Caught my attention! Keep going :)

    • Jennifer James April 8, 2012 at 11:45 am

      Will do. And yes, I do think my keyboard may just spontaneously combust. Particularly when Sam and J.T. have screen time together. J.T. is a bit of a player, a lifetime cowboy, dangerously good looking, and in love with (he believes) the wrong woman. He’ll get his own book. πŸ˜‰ But that won’t stop him from warning off Sam and being kind of a dick about it. >.<

  4. Kat McCarthy April 8, 2012 at 8:20 am

    Jennifer, it anyone can do this, you can!! You have just the right amount of sass to pull it off. I, for one, can’t wait to read what you create. its sounding good luv!

    • Jennifer James April 8, 2012 at 11:42 am

      Yay! Hi Kat! OOOhhh girl I got a great e-mail last night….I can’t wait until I have a definite “i can talk about this now” sorta thing in my hand. All I can say is “squee!” and I think I’ll be stopping by to Bad Boys later this year….. *wink wink*

  5. A.S. Fenichel April 8, 2012 at 8:57 am

    Yes, keep going. I’m curious!

  6. Sherry Gloag April 8, 2012 at 9:21 am

    Well, why not, they want their story tols, you want to tell it, so go for it :-) There’s enough in these six to captivate my attention.

  7. L.J. Kentowski April 8, 2012 at 9:41 am

    I vote ‘YES’. This was just enough to tease! I want more!

    • Jennifer James April 8, 2012 at 11:39 am

      I get called a tease quite often. LOL. I try to put up six sentences that are actually, well, intriguing. Interesting. Titillating. :) and I’m glad to see you here L.J. Always glad to see a new commenter.

  8. Veronica Scott April 8, 2012 at 1:02 pm

    Oh yes, definitely keep going, especially if these characters have been waiting for you to write them for a long time! I enjoyed the excerpt, would be happy to read the rest of the story…even six sentences at a time…

  9. Jo-Ann April 8, 2012 at 2:12 pm

    Definitely. I like your characters and I looove your conflict.

  10. Babette James April 8, 2012 at 3:14 pm

    Sounds like it’s going to be a fun story. And who doesn’t love a secy cowboy? πŸ˜‰ Nice six!

  11. Babette James April 8, 2012 at 3:17 pm

    uh, make that sexy cowboy. I guess I should put my glasses on. lol

  12. Eleri Stone April 8, 2012 at 9:12 pm

    I’m already half in love with him just because of his name but then you say he’s defending her before he really even knows her? **Swoon**

  13. Jennifer James April 8, 2012 at 9:34 pm

    πŸ˜€ He’s just the best. I really like this guy. I’m sitting here going over some old scenes I wrote for these two fixing some head hopping issues and whatnot (look at me, I can be taught!) and I’m falling all in crush with him again.

    He’s a hero…and it’s selfless, ingrained, just a part of who he is.

    I think Sam’s going to have a lot of fans and be perplexed by the phenomenon. lol

  14. Ann Swann April 8, 2012 at 9:55 pm

    Yes, keep going! We can always use another hero!

    • Jennifer James April 8, 2012 at 10:05 pm

      I am. Right now, actually. This scene is just too funny…. poor Meghan is pissed! And stranded. LOL. Think she’ll take a ride from Sam without reading him the riot act? Naw, I didn’t think so either…. ;D

      And now I’m going to get called a tease again. Oh well. :)